Below this post shows how I ignore Glens script & draw what I want.
Page one (6 panels)
Opening shot of the skyline of Acenscion city at midday reflected in a fish-eye lens wrapping at the edges. The sun glints in our vision.
Acenscion City. Soon
Pull back further now to reveal the battle helmet of the Pulse Suit. The previous panel's reflection is in the helmet's visor. Imagine a clunky badass battlesuit and you get the idea.
Pulse cruises through the streets low. In the b.g. we can see citizens running for their lives, some turning and pointing, others just running hell for leather down the crowded street.
RUN! HOLY SHIT!
Pulse's POV. People are fleeing and running, he's got some crazy-ass readouts going on, but we can see his flight plan highlighted on his vision and he's heading straight for the tallest building in the city. TradeCo.
The Pulse's boots increase in speed and intensity.
The TradeCo building is reflected in the visor.